Friday, September 21, 2012

Intro #1

For as long as I have been making my own money, I've had such a hard time saving it. Whether it's because I have crazy amounts of bills due, or because I went out and had some fun, or because there was a birthday or holiday that I had to use my money for, I am always broke.

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  1. This is the back half of an intro graf for a cause essay, but the front half, the hook, the writer making herself known a little, is completely missing. Right now about 3 billion people could probably sign this--remember the 'unique' assignment. Make your graf unique to you.

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