Thursday, October 11, 2012
Outro to Classification Essay
So after multiple encounters with bad drivers, I wish I could say that there's a way to prevent letting these people on the road. But as soon as that small, rectangular piece of plastic is handed to them and their freedom and a steering wheel are put into their hands, you'll never know what type of driver they will decide to be. Whether you're a speeder, a multi-tasker, or a grandma, please be aware of the people around you. A vehicle is a lot of responsibility and a lot of power, and I would rather not have my life or anyone elses life end from a stupid move you decide to make.
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I think a good argument could be made for dropping this: "Whether you're a speeder, a multi-tasker, or a grandma, please be aware of the people around you. A vehicle is a lot of responsibility and a lot of power, and I would rather not have my life or anyone elses life end from a stupid move you decide to make."
ReplyDeleteThat's a classic 'teacher' ending, the neat wrap-up teachers like, but for me anyway, ending with the image of someone getting their license and getting behind the wheel (to...drive god knows how) is a much stronger close.